Last Friday morning I went to the wind tunnel with my paper wind mill. My wind mill had a straw and it was purple. It was spinning around and the air force from the wind tunnel helped it spinning very fast.
Hi Robin,I like the way you described your windmill and what happened to it when you went into the wind tunnel. You used lots of different beginnings for your sentences.Well done!Mama (Tsana)
Hello Robin,I like your story. Where was the wind tunnel - was it at school? How did you get on at assembly the other Friday?Love Nana
Hi Robin,I enjoyed reading your blog. I used to like making paper windmills when I was at primary school.Keep write interesting stories and adding lots of detail.Love.Uggie
Hi Robin, what a great experiment and a lovely story describing what happened. Well done.ps...I note your hair stayed neat.Steve